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The secrets of effective subheadings

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You’ve written your document. Now you want people to read it, or what was the point?

You probably know no-one wants to look at a big block of text, so you break it up. Good start.

But it’s not enough, is it?

No. You also need signposts, like subheadings.

Well, that looks better already. And subheadings don’t just help your writing look good and your documents more inviting, they can work much harder than that.

More on that in a minute. But first, a word of warning.

Far too often, people write subheadings like these.

What does that tell you about what’s coming?

Not much.

Is that specific?

Not really.

Are you engaged by this?

I mean, do you even want to follow these signposts? Probably not.

If you’re trying to find your way in the world, a signpost will be no help at all if it doesn’t actually tell you what it’s pointing to.

And just like the signpost you’d follow to get somewhere, your subheadings have to be specific.

They have to tell your reader exactly what’s ahead, to help them get where they need to go. Even better if your subheading signposts make the reader want to go there.

So, what techniques can you use to inspire subheadings that not only draw your reader in, but also lead them through your document?

Well, remember: well-written subheadings can make your reader want to dive in.

So try some of these techniques.

Make sure your subheadings are direct and to the point.

Say something that will be of interest to your reader.

Try using verbs – remember, those of the doing and being words.

Doing so sounds dynamic and might even encourage action in some cases.

Evoke curiosity with a question.

Give an insight that you’ll expand on in the following section. Try including a number, a technique often used online, which lets your reader know exactly how much information to expect.

And there’s a PS.

You can use a play on words, but only if you think it’s appropriate to the tone of your document and your intended reader.

And, finally, remember to keep your subheadings short-ish. They should be long enough to be meaningful, but short enough to be understood and absorbed quickly.

So try some of these techniques for signposting your next document and see how far it takes you.

It’s easy to treat subheadings as a token afterthought once you’ve gone through the hard work of actually writing your document.

But it’s worth paying more attention to them than that. They can be an effective tool in drawing your reader in to your full text or helping them find your most important points.

Subheadings in summary

Remember, the best subheadings will read like an overview of your document – but they should also be compelling enough to encourage readers to dive in to the main copy. If you write online content, like blog posts, remember that website visitors do tend to skim-read a page before deciding whether to stay on it. The right subheadings could help tip the balance in your favour.

Help your readers navigate

In an ideal world, your documents and emails would never be skim-read. But, realistically, some of your time-pressed colleagues or clients will have to do just that. In which case, well-chosen subheadings will at least give them a summary and help them quickly find the most relevant parts.

Find your route

Subheadings can also help you with your writing process: try coming up with them as part of the planning stage before you write the body of the document, when you’re deciding the structure. Or, if you prefer, you could read through the ‘summary’ your subheads make after you’ve finished the document to double-check its structure: did you pick the best ‘route’? You can then adjust the order if necessary (but don’t forget to make sure the text still flows logically).

Keep it appropriate

Just like anything else you write, judge the suitability of your subheadings against the tone of the document and what you know about the reader.

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Catie Holdridge headshot

Catie joined Emphasis with an English literature and creative writing degree and a keen interest in what makes language work. Having researched, written, commissioned and edited dozens of articles for the Emphasis blog, she now knows more about the intricacies of effective professional writing than she ever thought possible.

She produced and co-wrote our online training programme, The Complete Business Writer, and these days oversees all the Emphasis marketing efforts. And she keeps office repartee at a suitably literary level.

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